#AmEditing | How #CopyEditing Boosts #Book Sales

Keep Calm and Let the Copy Editor Handle It
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In the last two posts, I’ve discussed beta reading and proofreading and how these processes will enhance the writing in your books and ultimately boost book sales. The more professional and easier to read the content in your book is, the more likely people will buy it, tell others about it, and leave you shiny 5-star reviews—no matter what genre you’re writing in. But in the vast world of fiction, genres like horror, erotica, paranormal, and sometimes sci-fi, can be seen comparatively as “less than” their literary and more “slice of life” type counterparts. If your work falls under any of those (or any combination of those) styles, investing in any one of these three services will do a great service to your book or novel and its subsequent sales.

Going a step beyond beta reading and proofreading, copy editing is far more invasive as a process. It is looking at the construction of the writing, each sentence, to make sure the words within that sentence work well together and to make sure each sentence builds to the next one without being redundant, overly complex, or laden with passive and unbalanced language. Unlike its more simplistic counterparts, copy editing will take on issues with layout, formatting, and developmental continuity (at every level, from running headers to table of contents to lists of figures and images to the color of your protagonist’s hair and the name of their one and only cousin).

Because this process is much more invasive and, in my opinion, more strict, I chose the definition provided by the Society for Editors and Proofreaders. Yes, it is a British source, and it’s an articulate and detail-oriented definition that leaves little to doubt. That’s precisely what I like about it.

Here is how they define a copy editor –

A professional copy-editor begins by checking that the copy is complete. Do the chapter titles and other elements match the list of contents? Are all the illustrations to hand? Is there a list of captions? What system of referencing is required? Are there footnotes or endnotes? Then the editor cleans up a copy of the document, fixes page set-up, spacing and fonts, cuts unwanted formatting, creates a stylesheet and starts to identify problems.

Working through the material, the copy-editor corrects errors in spelling, punctuation, grammar, style and usage, but also very long sentences and overuse of italic, bold, capitals, exclamation marks and the passive voice. They correct or query doubtful facts, weak arguments, plot holes and gaps in numbering. In fiction, they also check that characters haven’t changed their name or hair colour, look for sudden changes from first to third person and monitor the timeline, among other things.

And, here is how they define copy editing –

Copy-editing takes the raw material (the ‘copy’: anything from a novel to a web page) and makes it ready for publication as a book, article, website, broadcast, menu, flyer, game or even a tee-shirt.

The aim of copy-editing is to ensure that whatever appears in public is accurate, easy to follow, fit for purpose and free of error, omission, inconsistency and repetition. This process picks up embarrassing mistakes, ambiguities and anomalies, alerts the client to possible legal problems and analyses the document structure for the typesetter/designer.

One of the things that beta reading, proofreading, and copy editing seem to have in common is that they all look at the “larger” and “smaller” elements of the document simultaneously. It then becomes a matter of who fixes what and when. If you are pursuing the craft and services of a copy editor, it is most likely you have not published your book yet and it has not been under a proofreader’s loving gaze. You may copy edit before you select a beta reader, but you don’t necessarily have to. Especially, if you can find a beta reader who copy edits. (Or, a professional reader who does all three…)

Having a clear understanding of what a beta reader, proofreader, and copy editor bring to your document will help you select the right services for your document—no matter which stage of the game you are in. The great thing, in this quick-pub age, is that you can now, technically, perform these services at any stage of the game. However, knowing how hard it is to delete stuff off of the Internet, it may be a good idea to be more proactive, take some time, and get your manuscript edited before you publish.

In Service to the Stories

So, for the last week and a half, I’ve been thinking about two different things. I was going to write about them both in two separate blogs, but then I happened across a link in one of my weekly Google alerts to this book: Fearless Writing for Women: Extreme Encouragement and Writing Inspiration. A line from that book, where the author Susan Gabriel talks about artistic integrity and how to determine who to take advice from, mentions professionals in the field “who make a living in the service of stories.” Because she makes this statement on the first page of her book, I didn’t make it beyond that yet. But I certainly plan to.

Source Image: Heart of the Matter Online
Source Image: Heart of the Matter Online

The two things I had on my mind? The first day of school and why writers need editors–the phrase “make a living in the service of the stories” describes what I want to do as a copy editor and proofreader to the letter. I live in service to a great story–no matter the topic, no matter the genre.

Great stories deserve great platforms, and a strong foundation comes from displaying the proper mechanics of grammar, usage, spelling, syntax, punctuation, and all of those only scrape the surface of what an editor can provide an author, even a New York Times Best Seller.

How does the first day of school tie in? An editor can never stop learning, not with the way the industry keeps changing to meet new and potential technologies. And this time of year always gets me nostalgic for the first day of school. The excitement of a new (often, to me) outfit; new notebooks, pens, and pencils; and the potential for expanding my horizons–learning something new every day. I think I might have been one of a handful of kids from my school who actually enjoyed homework.

It is that joy, that desire to learn that drives my desire to give authors the best chance at being published and being seen as credible and reliable storytellers, no matter what kind of stories they tell.

 

Horror Writing podcast From Guardian Books

Joe Hill and Lauren Beukes talk to Guardian Books about Horror Writing. Joe talks about his novel NOS4R2, progression of the genre, following in his father’s footsteps, and his pen name. Though, I’m not familiar with Miss Beukes’s writing, her story The Shining Girls, discussed here, sounds intriguing! Check out the podcast and then the books discussed there!

Guardian Books podcast: Lauren Beukes and Joe Hill on horror writing | Books | guardian.co.uk.

The Dark Half

King + Romero = Comfort Film

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You know how some people have comfort food, comfort liquor, and comfort drugs? Those things you just have to have when you’re having a super shitty day. Well, this is my Comfort Film. Just about any King picture will do the trick, but this one speaks to me on a certain, deep-seeded level.

No, I was never a twin. No, I’m not a struggling, published writer. I’m a struggling, unpublished writer, but I’m not splitting hairs here, really.

Thad Beaumont has always felt like a kindred spirit to me. He understands the duality of humanity, on the surface, because of his twin, but deeply because he is a simultaneous participant/observer of human nature–a writer. Writing about humanity–on the level King does–requires that ability, to observe, reflect upon, and still take part in a life that may or may not be noteworthy on any level.

But King (and Beaumont) are doing just that. Creating lives of note that are lived on the page but appear real enough to be actually happening somewhere else. That’s the art of the horror story, any story truly. Is making the reader wholeheartedly believe that complete fiction could be real at any given point, in any given place. That’s what makes the story great, unstoppable.